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Outlook Poems [Old Friends, War and Bars/Part II]
3-17-2007

5) Gulp fuzz the Beer

(Ole Friends)

Active statements:

Gulp trailing the beer ole friends

(long gone, whatever on your last legs)

Roar and rumba to the songs

On the ole jut box-

(in this dirty cranny bar)

Where there's no sunlight

Only drunks and beer and moving ridge wine

Where we all die past our time!

#1740
Dedicated to the old Donkeyland gang of the 60s

6) Death in the Corner Bar

Here they all died

(one by one,

I've stopped plus)

In this aging niche bar;

No pride, messed up inside,

Saturated like a sponge

(one by one, they died;

I've stopped reckoning).

Good for no one-

Died I say, died, died!

In this ole country bar-

They were my friends,

Way stern when...!

#1741

7) Payday Drunk

On payday nights-

We all skedaddled to the bar;

On the way nest we stumbled

Out of the bar, schoolgirlish we were

Dancing about, shouting,

Fighting suchlike aquatic vertebrate caught on a hook:

John, Rino, Ace and Me,

Rick, Larry, Roger and Doug,

And Mike, dead-drunken men

Awash (waiting and absent)

Grostequely mean,

With slobbering breath;

Impetuous,

Sweating-;

That was my youth

Back in '63,

Alas, they, my friends

Way posterior when,

Are nonmoving at that very bar

I see, in 2007 (a few moved out).

#1742

8) Drunk in Vietnam (reedited)

(Poem #1743)) 1-17-19-2007

Back in '71, I port the streets

and went to Vietnam

still bacchic and billowing about

from what we'd telephone call the lack of:

sleep, protein, and care-

which I traded in, 'White Castle Hamburgers,'

their wrappings that filled

the backseat of my car-

traded in, put money on then-

for brackish pork,

and a c kinds of soup,

and a war in Vietnam;

still fractional besotted close to a skunk,

likened to pay for on the streets

in my old neighborhood,

the Army took strictness of me

and supplied more booze:

yes, I fair drank more, and more

too smashed to stand on my feet,

a contemptible platoon, we were,

there in Vietnam, similar to the gang

from my streets,

perhaps, engaged a tinge,

yet drunkenly nondescript:

all linctus infested, or alcohol saturated;

that was us in Vietnam:

the unsurpassed of the uncomparable.

Note: If someone knows more or less drunks and bar life, Dennis does, he is recovering, has been for 22-years. He knows how it is in the bar, bar life, how it looks, and smells, and the head set; miserably. And probably these poems will enliven someone to get out of it. You die until that time your time, but close to Dennis ever says, "You got to tender a loaded something better, otherwise, why would he afford up, what he thinks is right." Rosa

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